Main idea and topic sentences

The graffiti's roar

Personal relation: In elementary, I saw a lot of people draw or write something on the drawer of the table, which sometimes included secrets. I drew or wrote something on them too. I felt really exciting when it occurred that my seniors or juniors might see them. It is also a kind of graffiti. It is the only graffiti I’ve drawn and I still remember my excitement. Therefore, I’m curious about how the professional graffiti painter feel when they paint graffiti? When I’m Junior high, I found a special graffiti which is a bear and it always attach the word ”Bare” next to the picture. Although t didn’t know what does it mean but I found 3 same graffiti in different places. Afterward, I keep my eye on graffiti because I wish to find the same graffiti in different places.

Main idea:In most countries,graffiti is considered defacement and vandalism. However, nowadays, graffiti brings a lot of benefits for the society.
Topic sentence 1:
In most countries, marking or painting property, without the property owner's consent is  a punishable crime.
 Supporting sentences/examples:

1.Some countries have organizations of cleaning up the graffiti. In 1922, France scouts gathered 70 people engaged 日行一善 and cleaned up the graffiti on the walls of the Mayrieres cave, which were important historical spots last for ten thousands years.

2.  The media considers graffiti as illegal or scandal and had a field day reporting on accusations of them. Justin Bieber was caught spraying graffiti on walls in Rio de Janeiro of his last day in Brazil and it was reported.

3. Graffiti is considered to be a vandalism problem and usually councils are using lots of money to clean up graffiti vandals. Graffiti is associated with gangsters who engage in drugs and mindless violence.

4. 行政法規：社會秩序維護法:在公寓外牆等地方隨意塗鴉，雖然不至於構成刑法中的犯罪行為，但這種破壞公共秩序的行為，很可能違反「社會秩序維護法」。
　依照「社會秩序維護法」第九十條第一項第二款規定：「未經他人許可，張貼、塗抹或畫刻於他人之交通工具、圍牆、房屋或其他建築者，可處新臺幣三千元以下罰鍰或申誡。」

5. Graffiti is considered a crime of vandalism in many countries such as Brazil. It carries a jail sentence of between three months to one year.

6. In 1970, New York faced difficulties in economy, poor, a lack of funds for operation …etc. The government and the media blamed on the graffiti. The government’s point of view is the broken windows theory, they thought graffiti is a small crime but if they couldn’t solve it, it’ll proved their incapable.

Topic sentence 2:Graffiti plays an important role in art, it's a method for painters to release their pressure. It can also be a kind of advertisement.
Supporting sentence:
1.Graffiti gradually becomes a kind of public art and even affect designs, paintings, and movies. Some graffiti even become a spot such as Ximen and the graffiti hall of fame reveal many graffiti.

2.Some graffiti’s ingredients included food. The food graffiti uses jam, chocolate, cheese or even chewing gum to create a graffiti.
3. Graffiti in the city's corner is a way for the authorities to promote the victory of the revolution. In the streets of Havana, Cuba, there are no colorful billboards. Instead, there are various graffiti of many countries supporting or promoting politics.

4. Nowadays, under the structure of the society, nobody listen to the teenagers’ sounds. A new generation of young people pick up their spray cans and boldly express their feelings with street art.
5.Many large companies adopted graffiti advertisements such as Nike and IBM (IBM). Even "Time" magazine, has a graffiti ad on a wall in New York.
6. Graffiti appears in movies and advertisements on TV.
Topic sentence 3:Graffiti is an important shout out for the citizens or the minority groups. Sometimes, it can also influence the government's decisions.
1. More and more graffiti painter painted something about their opinions about politics. Such as Candy Bird: spokesman for the society, his mural works propagate his humanity and ideas against every injustice in the city.
Some even satire the decisions of the government.

2. Graffiti excavate the opinions deep in people’s heart. As the result of the graffiti, some people gathered together to strive for their rights. The Rainbow Military Community in Taichung: Due to the painting, the village escaped from the fate of demolition.